Comic Page Script

Below is the script of the 4 pages I will be illustrating. I had written out the full script but through development and editing I have decided to change quite a bit towards the end so I will only put up the first 4 pages

 I didn't stick to it to heart, but it helped to figure out the rhythm of the panels and to visualize what would be included on which page. Also, visualizing it helped me design how two opposite pages would complement each other.

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PAGE 1

PANEL 1.

 Front of Strip Bar with bouncer in view. 

Couple of people talking. 

Anna Walks in left.

PANEL 2.

 Bouncer Nods to Anna 

(Close up)

PANEL 3.

 (Zoom out)

 Anna walks by and waves

PANEL 4.

 (Aerial Shot) Anna Turns into alley 

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PAGE 2

PANEL 1. 

Anna in dark alley next to dumpster 

PANEL 2. 

Anna inhales from cigarette

PANEL 3. 

Close up of lit cherry (FX)

PANEL 4. 

Anna exhales smoke

PANEL 5. 

Anna, hand on wall, throws up

 (FX) *COUGH*

PANEL 6. 

Anna hand on wall“Goddammit"

+PAGE 3.

PANEL 1. 

Anna quickly opens side door, steps through

PANEL 2. 

View of door slowly closing. Ominous shadow on floor 

PANEL 3. 

(MED PANEL)

 Hallway of Strip bar

PANEL 4. 

Woman leaning on Wall 

“YOU’RE LATE”

PANEL 5. Woman walks out into bar.

PAGE 6.

PANEL 1. 

Establishing Shot of inside Strip bar

PANEL 2. 

Lonely man sitting at bar. Big man at end of bar watching stage.

PANEL 3. 

(Zoom) 

Man stares at empty drink

PANEL 4.

 Bartender asks 

“ANOTHER SODA LEMON HON?”

Man puts hand up, smile

“NO, THANK YOU”

PANEL 5.

Man raises hand

“CANDY, BUY THIS MAN A DRINK ON ME”