Comic Development 

I wrote out the basic premise of the comic in my sketchbook to delineate the important aspects of the overall story. I want to know if there are any ques, or 'easter eggs' I could include for when my story goes further and people can read back to the first chapters and see that there were hidden clues and hints to what was going to happen. Some literal and some metaphorical.

Including lonely guy at bar, and bouncer. Every character in this chapter was included for a purpose and will have more story development in the future.